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Post by stylopz on Aug 2, 2020 6:01:33 GMT -5
feedback will be much appreciated
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Post by Rev on Aug 3, 2020 21:43:46 GMT -5
I've told you how much I liked this already, but I wanted to leave proper feedback because you've quickly become one of my favorite editors as of late. Theres a ton of things I loved in here: the parallels between matches and how each wrestler had to adapt, creating the buildup of their final match by showing the different paths both Kota and Kaz had to take to get there, and just a handful of editing bits throughout. There is room for improvement though and I think its in the way you structured this video. I like the idea behind the split screen section but there were a ton of things going on and it got overwhelming when you started to include actual wrestling. Aesthetically the split screen blending together did not look that great with certain shots, and I would have rather seen a border down the middle. Even keeping it plain with one clip at a time would have been a wiser decision. Either way, this brings me to my main criticism and that is "less is more." What I mean by that is capitalizing on your most important shots and putting more focus on them. Its something you pick-up over time and there some spots in here that are fine. But the structure just happens to get inconsistent at times. For example, 2:20 would have been an ideal spot to throw in a flashback section. The text was a nice touch, try messing around with blending options and you might get some better looks. Hope this isn't a lot to take in, I tend to just ramble with videos I see potential in. Great work Opz!
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Post by stylopz on Aug 4, 2020 3:21:46 GMT -5
Really appreciate the time you took for a proper feedback my dude! I will keep that in mind for next time and I agree on most stuff you pointed out !
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