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Post by Cataclysm on Jun 11, 2012 14:19:27 GMT -5
Freestyle flow, no it's not written open up the door you can see what I'm shittin, Rev is a pussy call him two kittens, I come from a city where you'll come up missin, hey I'm stronger than hulk hogan in his prime, I'll be still gettin money while your still fussin over a dime, and I keep the crowd alive when I rhyme, you just kill the crowd, lemme bring it back, revive, the cure for disease is for you to just stop, you'll be ridin in the backseat cause I'm the mofuckin cop.
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Post by zee on Jun 11, 2012 15:11:44 GMT -5
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh snap.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2012 16:14:14 GMT -5
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Post by Rev on Jun 11, 2012 16:49:46 GMT -5
Ha, is this guy serious, is that what you call rappin?
Shit, I just wrote this rhyme at Denny's on a tinyass napkin.
I had a Grand Slam, with bacon eggs pancakes and an english muffin.
You tryna sound like a Big Bad Wolf with all your huffin and puffin.
So, how long did it take you to write the "freestyle"?
Was it after you got done watching 8 mile?
Don't buy into the hype everyone, this kids' only a mirage
Yo, you're only 12 years old? I bet you sound like Nicki Minaj.
If you're a cop, tell your buddies its' a 187.
Cause I'm shooting these bullets and sending your soul to the heavens.
You little shit, your gimmick is pathetic, quit tryna act unique
cause I'm Dr. Seuss the veternarian, and I'll take this Cat in the Hat and put his ass to sleep.
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Post by Maf on Jun 11, 2012 17:02:43 GMT -5
More appropriate Chang videos:
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Post by Her 69 Eyes on Jun 11, 2012 17:32:25 GMT -5
Well, it is.
Is this meant to lower my expectations?
Why two kittens? And wouldn't that make him pussies?
Miami? Isn't that where Frank is from?
Are you suggesting that one's strength is proportional to the amount of money they make?
That's awfully presumptuous. You went first.
That's the cure for all diseases. Hey, leukemia. Just stop!
I like this. We need more rap songs that are sympathetic to the cause of law enforcement.
**1/2 out of *****
Didn't care about the characters, the ending was abrupt. Good effort.
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Post by Cataclysm on Jun 11, 2012 18:47:51 GMT -5
Ha, is this guy serious, is that what you call rappin? Shit, I just wrote this rhyme at Denny's on a tinyass napkin. I had a Grand Slam, with bacon eggs pancakes and an english muffin. You tryna sound like a Big Bad Wolf with all your huffin and puffin. So, how long did it take you to write the "freestyle"? Was it after you got done watching 8 mile? Don't buy into the hype everyone, this kids' only a mirage Yo, you're only 12 years old? I bet you sound like Nicki Minaj. If you're a cop, tell your buddies its' a 187. Cause I'm shooting these bullets and sending your soul to the heavens. You little shit, your gimmick is pathetic, quit tryna act unique cause I'm Dr. Seuss the veternarian, and I'll take this Cat in the Hat and put his ass to sleep. I'm 14 years old get yo shit right, cause I had Denny's while I was countin money on my bed last night, your sayin you'll send me to the heavens, well you're only eleven, I'll admit 8 Mile indeed is my favorite movie, but I bet you don't got the balls to get in my face and do me, but you would like that, don't deny it I know it's true, you wish you was black but I know you're really fuckin blue, oh I'm goin to sleep? You won't hear a peep, after I knock your ass out, cause that's what I'm all about, the thug life, yeah the one you wish you had, sadly noone wanna call you they dad, you think you bad, no your just a little whiny bitch, you betta shut yo cocky ass up before it gets thrown in a ditch. |
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Post by Rev on Jun 11, 2012 20:39:04 GMT -5
Eric's assessment >>>
My round > Cat's 2 Rounds
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Post by Maf on Jun 11, 2012 21:28:11 GMT -5
Well, it is. Is this meant to lower my expectations? Why two kittens? And wouldn't that make him pussies? Miami? Isn't that where Frank is from? Are you suggesting that one's strength is proportional to the amount of money they make? That's awfully presumptuous. You went first. That's the cure for all diseases. Hey, leukemia. Just stop! I like this. We need more rap songs that are sympathetic to the cause of law enforcement. **1/2 out of ***** Didn't care about the characters, the ending was abrupt. Good effort. +High 5 |
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Post by benjamin on Jun 11, 2012 22:49:40 GMT -5
Well, it is. Is this meant to lower my expectations? Why two kittens? And wouldn't that make him pussies? Miami? Isn't that where Frank is from? Are you suggesting that one's strength is proportional to the amount of money they make? That's awfully presumptuous. You went first. That's the cure for all diseases. Hey, leukemia. Just stop! I like this. We need more rap songs that are sympathetic to the cause of law enforcement. **1/2 out of ***** Didn't care about the characters, the ending was abrupt. Good effort. You're just jealous he didn't call YOU out to battle, mr. fancy words aren't ya?  |
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Post by J-Roc on Jun 11, 2012 23:28:03 GMT -5
I'm 14 years old get yo shit right, cause I had Denny's while I was countin money on my bed last night, your sayin you'll send me to the heavens, well you're only eleven, I'll admit 8 Mile indeed is my favorite movie, but I bet you don't got the balls to get in my face and do me, but you would like that, don't deny it I know it's true, you wish you was black but I know you're really fuckin blue, oh I'm goin to sleep? You won't hear a peep, after I knock your ass out, cause that's what I'm all about, the thug life, yeah the one you wish you had, sadly noone wanna call you they dad, you think you bad, no your just a little whiny bitch, you betta shut yo cocky ass up before it gets thrown in a ditch.  |
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Post by VyperJMc on Jun 12, 2012 0:40:49 GMT -5
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Post by Rev on Jun 12, 2012 1:01:30 GMT -5
I will NEVER EVER forgive you Vyper. We're through!
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Post by VyperJMc on Jun 12, 2012 1:07:17 GMT -5
Good! I don't need yo triflin' ass. I gots a new sugar daddy. |
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Post by Rev on Jun 12, 2012 1:11:38 GMT -5
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